Kiss the Sun

I felt the sun today
and lifted my face.
Forget wrinkle warnings
for once; it’s February
and sunlight is like water
after days of only coffee.

4 thoughts on “Kiss the Sun

  1. This is great.

    The reader gets a glimpse into the narrator’s psyche with the phrase “forget the wrinkle warnings for once”.

    That first real ray of sunlight after a cold winter is transformational. And I am completely envious of how you capture that in the last two lines.

    http://edgarastonehill.com

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