4 thoughts on “Kiss the Sun”

  1. This is great.

    The reader gets a glimpse into the narrator’s psyche with the phrase “forget the wrinkle warnings for once”.

    That first real ray of sunlight after a cold winter is transformational. And I am completely envious of how you capture that in the last two lines.

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